Nice little ditty here.
I like it, very techy. However, gotta concur with everyone else. you should definately redo this with some punch and variation, this could be an amazing intro to a bangin' techno piece with a little oomph to it. The voice is cool, the drums in the very beginning feel a little akward though. Don't start out with the quarter notedrive thing unless it's with a kick, it sounds weird in treble.'
Overall, good stuff
I can tell the FX and vox took some good work.
Thanks for your review of my Axel F: Vocal Remix, as well.
~Hyper-Freak92